Today we went on our with mum and dad and brock and i rode our bikes. It was 9.5km long. On our walk we cam across some deer at Willowbank Wildlife Park that were playing by the fence. We stopped and talked to them. From Peyton
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Monday, April 6, 2020
Today we went on our with mum and dad and brock and i rode our bikes. It was 9.5km long. On our walk we cam across some deer at Willowbank Wildlife Park that were playing by the fence. We stopped and talked to them. From Peyton
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ReplyDeleteWow! That was a long bike ride! How amazing seeing those beautiful little deer on your walk! I'm glad you are managing to get out and get some exercise each day while we are on lockdown!
Keep blogging!
Mrs Pascoe
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