Friday 23 October 2020
Hi boggers this is why we need a pool at school because it will be more fun.
it was so fun.
Friday, October 23, 2020
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hi my name is Lochlan i´m from Ahipara school. I like that you need a pool and it´s sad you do not have a pool. good luck to get a pool.
ReplyDeleteHello Peyton. My name is Samantha from Ahipara School and I do agree. Maybe next time you could put the text in a different way cause it made it a little hard to read. Other then that I loved this! Blog ya later!
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Taj I go to Ahipara school. I really liked the blog but you could work on it a bit.
ReplyDeleteHi Peyton,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Dylan from Ahipara school
Your story about why you should have a pool is interesting,
I,too, agree that you should have a pool from reading what you said.
Anyway Blog you later.
Thank you every person that comment on my blog
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Eli I am from Ahipara School. I agree I think we need a pool too because it is always hot. Good job blog ya later.
ReplyDeleteKiaora Peyton! I love your reasons why we should have a school pool! I totally agree with u that we need a school pool! Billie
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