Thursday 27th August 2020
This week I have done some writing of the three little pigs for a book week.
It was so fun.
Thursday, August 27, 2020
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Kia Ora Peyton.
ReplyDeleteMy name is Brittany and I go to Waikowhai Primary School. I really liked you blog post. I loved the story you wrote, it was really cool. This blog post reminded me of when I did writing in my class. Maybe next time you could add a bit more infomation on what you had to do.Thankyou for sharing your amazing work with me. If you have any time feel free to check out my blog at wpsbrittanyp.blogspot.com
Blog you later!
Hi Peyton, I interiged with your story, because you've made quite a twist compared to the original one, I really like your moral, saying that appreciating the people who've helped you, which means love, kindness and their importance for your life. Next time you can just ajust your paragraphs, because some sentences were seperated, overall it's an excellent story! Keep it up! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you
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